Wednesday, March 08, 2006

the bane of her existence

The room sat in perfect stillness.
But she keep spinning.. spinning into a whole new realm.

She tried to conjure up an image, but there was none.
What is taking him?

Strange thing.. TIME.
When needed most, the more it befriends,
or worse;
Weds selfishness.

Time was their enemy.
Time was all they needed.
Timing was everything; or so they say.

Perhaps love lost interest on her;
He lost interest on her.
Possibly.

He was all she wanted and she took him away.
She was to blame, was she not?

She cannot go beyond what is right,
Can she not?

- No, i am not sure. for i understand only a little.

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

what a special misery. is she paying the debt she never promised?

1:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

when did love ran out? did u know d day? d hour? d minute? did it stop suddenly as if someone turned off the tap? we all used to think dat love lasted forever, dat once someone loved u, truly loved u.. they love u til d end of tym.. life and love is not like that bambs.. though u must consider urself lucky for havin experienced love.. be happy.. make the most of ur existence while ur still young.. =)

7:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

sooo SAD ;( but love always moves unconditional, blindly and in mysterious ways.

8:02 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi bambz, PRINCESS here!

im loving your poetry! so deep so true...i really envy you cuz you express yourself in an artistic way...i tried to write a poetry on my own but i couldn't....how sad huh?!? enough about me..."this is all about bambie" now...lolz

all i can say..time is really important in a relationship. perfect timing for everything. love will fade away if a couple can't spend time to each other. there's no passion to share...there's no love to share if you guys cant be together physically...

lemme give you a piece of advice cuz you still seem sad...and i hate seeing you sad...be strong....be a fighter... never to let someone have the satisfaction of knowing your weakness. When they do, they take you for granted, and even if they dont intend to, they may run over u, and you end up being that one, that made them better for the next person. I know it has to be hard to hear things like this, but I believe in keeping it real and sharing what i went through, hoping that it will benefit the next person. I do sincerely hope that things do get better for you, but you have to be strong and look HURT straight in the face and tell it to go to F#$*K!@G Hell! If you dont develop strength, it will be impossible for things to get better you know.. Well you take care, my dear friend.

1:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I was stranded in a deep misery before. And I kept asking when it will stop... And now i'm glad time passed by so fast. Now I knew only time has the answers. Time taught me what love is, and how it realy works... Maybe just maybe some point in your life you'll thank the misery. ΓΌ

7:29 PM  

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